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Aftertaste

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Literature Text

Dear Heart,

You taste so bitter
52 Week Six Word Story Challenge - Write a six word story that must start with 'Dear'
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3wyl's avatar
I like the way you have formatted things to show that the heart is really bitter, and almost jaded, in a way.. the phrasing is good and I like the way you have made it almost endearing in an ironic kind of way, though maybe not, I guess. Depends on how you see it. ^^;

Great stuff. :nod: